You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Mr. John,
I hope you are doing well. I am Bhawna Sharma, MCA (2010-2013) batch pass out from your collage. I am writing this to request you for the letter of reference that is urgently needed at my new organization.
You would be proud to know that I have been offered a Data Scientist position at Google, Sans Francisco and I would be part of a team that would be developing a breakthrough model in voice analysis for NASA. This job would allow me to work with the brightest minds in the Data Analytics field and be part of an esteemed global company like Google. To be able to work in a company that is a pioneer in IT is like a dream and I would like to express my gratitude to you for all your guidance.
The final procedure of the HR process requires a letter of reference. Hence, I would request you to kindly mail the same mentioning my projects and thesis on the college’s letterhead. Moreover, you can also add your personal comments on my work that would make my credentials stronger. You are requested to mail it directly to HR at lisa@google.com.
I appreciate your assistance in this matter.
Yours Sincerely,
Bhawna Sharma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-20 | Bhawna Sharma | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-27 | ns478511 | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-13 | Harwinderjit kaur | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-05 | enassar | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-05 | enassar | 73 | view |
- Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a negative or a positive development? 78
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. 56
- Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art?Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects? 56
- Some people think that they can be encouraged through sporting events like olympics Others think that there are more better ways to encourage adults for exercise Discuss both and give your opinion 84
- The system used for rubbish garbage collection in your local area is not working properly This is causing problems for you and your neighbours Write a letter to the local council In your letter describe how the rubbish collection system is not working pro 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...-2013 batch pass out from your collage. I am writing this to request you for the ...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Scientist) must be used with a third-person verb: 'positions'.
Suggestion: positions
...at I have been offered a Data Scientist position at Google, Sans Francisco and I would b...
^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tter. Yours Sincerely, Bhawna Sharma
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60576923077 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8096303572 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3296028995 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170127810326 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717465786833 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523685749164 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108489216457 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459615322191 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.