You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Hello Sir John,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have applied for a job and I need a letter of reference for you as per application requirement.

Sir, as you know that I am an enthusiastic developer and passionate to work on mobile application development. This is one of the the finest mobile application development companies in city. Its my dream job to work in such a great company. It would be a golden opportunity for me to polish my technical skills as well as explore latest tools and technologies.

This letter is required by company as they may contact you and verify my qualification and skills so this letter is of extreme importance and will help me a lot to achieve success in first step of my career.

In this letter, please mention my technical and development skills as well as tools and technologies on which I have worked.
As I have worked with you on final year project, so I will request you to please put some of its details as well. Moreover, please attach your phone number as well as email address so that recruiter may contact you to verify about information that i have mentioned in my resume.

I am much thankful to you.

Yours sincerely,
Ghulam Rasool

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...application development. This is one of the the finest mobile application development c...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...application development. This is one of the the finest mobile application development c...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ication development companies in city. Its my dream job to work in such a great co...
^^^
Line 4, column 324, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'explore the latest'.
Suggestion: explore the latest
...o polish my technical skills as well as explore latest tools and technologies. This letter ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81529829547 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6161662865 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8181818182 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244256868237 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926815918752 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858581343808 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138479147442 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107255952092 0.0580467560999 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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