You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :
Give detail of the job
Explain why it is important to you
Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.
Dear Mr Philip,
I am writing this letter with regard to inform you that I have got final interview call from Hyatt Regency for profile of Operations Management. I will be responsible for; managing the team of 6 people, cash counter operations, check-in and checkout facilitation and vendor management.
As you know how hard I have been trying to get placed in this world renowned hotel group, which is a dream come true experience for me. Apart from it, company would be sending a selected candidate to Vancouver campus for six months course in Human management.
I would be very thankful to you if you could send me a reference letter with my past grades in diploma completion. In addition, if you could mention about my internship program at Park view hotel, where I handled reception customer management for 3 months.
I would require it by 30 May,2018 to submit with the company. I have menioned my email-ID along with this letter in case of further information required from my side.
Looking forard to hearing from you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Jaswinder Singh Brar
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for me. Apart from it, company would be sending a selected candidate to Vancouve...
^^
Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'May 2018'.
Suggestion: May 2018
...r 3 months. I would require it by 30 May,2018 to submit with the company. I have meni...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, apart from, in addition, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95081967213 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69896679313 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710382513661 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.0361921606 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154865020778 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616744959719 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431525476111 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075161663025 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366457402761 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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