write a letter to your boss apologizing for the recent meeting you missed at work.
1. Apologise for missing the meeting
2.explain what happened
3.say what you will do to compensate
Dear Mr Philip,
I am writing this letter to apologise for missing the Department Manager monthly meet held today at Bradford store. I am really disheartened to miss out the presentation of my sales team,while being major agenda of the meeting.
Due to non-availability of my wife, I had to drop my children to school, which is a 15 minute car drive from my home. Unfortunately, due to recent major Bus accident, traffic administration diverted the traffic through single lane Oxford street, thus resulting in jam packed road in peak hours. Therefore despite a lot of efforts, I arrived 2 hours late at office, consequently missing the meeting time deadline.
I am really sorry to show lack of punctuality on this precious moment and assure you that it would never be repeated in the future. However, I have asked George to forward me minutes of meeting, so that I can check on my scope of work. I would request you to kindly assist me on my queries with next course of actions to be undertaken after the meeting.
I hope you will forgive me on reasonable grounds and be assured of my commitment to the company in future.
Yours sincerely,
Jaswinder Singh Brar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...ss out the presentation of my sales team,while being major agenda of the meeting. D...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...lting in jam packed road in peak hours. Therefore despite a lot of efforts, I arrived 2 h...
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Line 9, column 97, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...assured of my commitment to the company in future. Yours sincerely, Jaswinder Singh B...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80295566502 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86911877737 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674876847291 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.4345494805 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171652131107 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633966600829 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605164929978 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100065679509 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584250596602 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.