You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at college.
Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter:
• say what job you have applied for
• explain why you want this job
• suggest what information the teacher should include
Dear Madam,
I am penning down this epistle to request you regarding a letter of reference for my employment as mentioned in the recuitment criteria.
You would be very proud to hear that I have applied for the position of senior software developer in one of most reputed multinational companies of our realm namely, Infosis Private Limited. If you could remember, I used to share this aspiration of mine to get recruited in this firm as this company is known for its state-of-the-art work in IT industry.
I have been struggling to clear its initial rounds since the completion of my post-graduation because as aforementioned, this is not only my ever-time goal but also the benefits offered to the employees by them are commendable which has even burgeoned my desire to work here.Moreover, I want to grow by leaps and bounds for which this job is a crucial milestone in that path.
Thereby, when I was asked for a reference, the first name that came to my mind was yours since you were well-acquainted with my ambition. I would be highly grateful if you could write a reference for me including my participation during the academic years. The addition of my projects and work assignments will enhance my profile too and I hope you will mention those as well.
Hoping to have a positive response from your side and thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Anna Maria.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Madam, I am penning down this epistle to reques...
^^^
Line 4, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...s even burgeoned my desire to work here.Moreover, I want to grow by leaps and bounds for...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.85567010309 389% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82700421941 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01074884239 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628691983122 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.0235351468 44.8134815571 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.111111111 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 16.8248392259 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352185870983 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144037551419 0.0766984524023 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571615689122 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188536064292 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560022473097 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.