You are attending a course at the evening school. Write a letter to the director of the school with a complaint about your course in your letter.
- Describe the course you are taking
- Explain what you do not like about the course
- What should be done about it in your opinion.
Dear sir,
I am smith, one of the students of evening accounting course, writing this letter to complain about some dissatisfaction about the course content, teachers and infrastructure.
Actually, I joined in the institute in April 2019 (Admission No: CE3243) for Ten-month Accounting Diploma and I was the offered the classes experts like Chartered Accountants and professors at the time of admission. Above that the brochure had mentioned certain portions to cover within six months and practical classes by using computers in the institute.
It is pity to say that many of the classes were handled by some graduate teachers instead experts and they fail to complete the syllabus during the six-month period. Even many of the lessons are left confused or incomplete which is needed to be revised. Moreover, many of the computers are dead now and yet to be fixed sooner.
So I hope you would provide some extra classes by experts as you offered to at time of entry. I need more practical classes especially to become experts in handling accounting software. If fail to do so, I humbly request you to refund my fee as soon as possible. So I would be join in any other training institute.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank in advance
Smith
(Admission No: CE3243)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am smith, one of the students of eveni...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring from you soon. Thank in advance Smith Admission No: CE3243
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou soon. Thank in advance Smith Admission No: CE3243
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75850956134 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615740740741 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9909083395 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162813761889 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527064647696 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660349874345 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801679394326 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818297797257 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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