You are attending a night college. You are not happy about a course you are doing. Write a letter to the director:
• Explain what your course is
• Why you are not happy about it
• Tell the director what you want them to do.
Dear Mr. Dave,
I am one of the participants in late evening classes and I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction of the poor facility in AI course, particularly in night batches.
The course is about intermediate understanding on artificial intelligence and its practical implementation to leverage this technology commercially. It comprises of three months classroom training and other three months for hands-on experience. At present, the course is on the verge of completion on theoretical part.
But, there is a huge roadblock for the completion of our course because there are not enough machines in the lab and whatever is available is either damage or incapable to perform certain crucial tasks. Ideally, it should be taken care before the beginning of the course but I think it has been overlooked. Now, it became a serious issue for all of us in the batch.
We would be really grateful if immediate actions are taken so that it does not affect the affect our productivity. If some adjustments can be made in timetable, we can use other labs where sufficient resources are available, such as early morning course.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...verage this technology commercially. It comprises of three months classroom training and oth...
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Line 14, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon. Yours faithfully, Sandip Ramani
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13930348259 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08261051095 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681592039801 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0289180175 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9090909091 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115307925995 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401649051138 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452815745672 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633576110353 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053163063232 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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