Dear Sir or Madam,
I have been working as senior chemical engineer in operations department in your company for 6 years. I am writing this letter to express my interest to work in other departments of our company preferably in technical service team.
My current job is becoming monotonous and it is not having any scope for further innovation. I feel my career is stagnated in the company for the last two years so I am not able provide more value to the company in this role. I would like to take a job change in our organization.
Let me explain the reasons for the job change. As you can see from my attached resume, I am a data scientist and I have completed masters program in data science and machine learning. I have a keen interest in doing data analysis of our company data and provide more useful insights about our company operations to enhance the profitability. I will also get benefited because of the role change by utilizing the growth opportunities in the new department that I would like to move. I would be grateful if I could be considered for the requested job change.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Srinivas Reddy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 517, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... new department that I would like move. I would be grateful if I could be conside...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...idered for the requested job change. I look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86597938144 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80999234282 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8832947629 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8181818182 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290012272308 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10024379971 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410731845896 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157416948907 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382624355917 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.