You are a club secretary. An expert from a different country recently gave a talk at the club. Write a letter to thank him/her and say how club members enjoyed it. Include the following in your letter:
– When and where did the talk take place?
– Explain why the members enjoyed it.
– Suggest another lecture to be done in the future.
Dear Mathew,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to thank you for taking out time from your busy schedule and giving a guest lecture on Healthy lifestyle and Exercise at our club "The Gymkhana" last week. It was one of the most intriguing sessions which we had here in a couple of months.
To elucidate all the club members thoroughly enjoyed the session as it was the most interactive sessions on how regular exercise can improve health and cut the risk of chronic diseases especially due to the fact that now consumption of fast food is increasing and lifestyle is changing at a fast pace. We don't get many experts from the industry in this club who can share practical examples and tips on how a balanced diet and sports activity can lead to healthy living. It was an engaging session especially for the young members of our club, as you laid several facts which helped to understand the ill effects of smoking.
Since this was a captivating session I would like to invite you once again for another session to help share more knowledge on a similar subject so that it helps young adults of our club to mend their habits which can help them to adopt a healthy lifestyle.
I look forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely
Brain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 306, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ifestyle is changing at a fast pace. We dont get many experts from the industry in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67105263158 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48304112505 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3227507228 44.8134815571 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199634317367 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777223628842 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546525727764 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110982298949 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05577572371 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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