You are coming home late night and detained by police Department for a routine check (Petrol). The officer on duty behaved with you rudely.
Escalate the complaint to Police Commissioner about this incident.
In your letter
- Introduce yourself
- Describe what happend
- Say what you want Police Commissioner to do for you
Dear Sir,
My name is John Carberry and I am an information technology consultant, works with a multinational company in Cyber City, Gurgaon. I live at sector 40 which is near to Sector 31, Police Station.
I am writing this letter to raise my concern on misbehavior by your patrolling team. Last night, when I was returning after attending official party in Cannaught Place, New Delhi, I was stopped by some police officers at Iffco Chowk. Furthermore, they questioned me for a while and I answered them in detail, but they started shouting on me without any reason. In addition, One of the officer, constable, Sunil Kumar, used inappropriate language while talking to me.
This type of language to public is not acceptable at any cost. I have video recording of the whole incident with me, which could be considered as strong evidence. I would like to ask you to take a strict action against your team who misbehaved and used inappropriate language. I want police department to suspend the guilty officers from their duty.
Looking forward to hear from you at the earliest.
Yours Sincerely,
John Carberry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ehaved and used inappropriate language. I want police department to suspend the g...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ers from their duty. Looking forward to hear from you at the earliest. Yours Sinc...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00531914894 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84499890805 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702127659574 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4529226189 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4166666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15561447535 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514538354767 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342338918893 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840632197689 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296080571368 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.