Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter in reference to an application of a week’s holiday in the coming week as there will be a conference held next week. I am parth and am currently pursuing second semester in computer science course in your college at uppal.
The course I am studying is a master's in computer science in Data Science. I have opted for this course due to my work commitments. I have completed one semester and let me inform you that it has been a wonderful experience and learning with the faculties that are excellent who provides lessons both theoretical and practical at the best five star establishments.
The National board of science is conducting their annual conference in our city in the second week of May this year. I wish to continue my studies in research and this conference would help me to learn abut various research opportunities available in industry as well as get an opportunity to work with one of the leading companies in india. Hence, I would request you t grant me leave from 14th May till 20th May.
I would be grateful if you would grant me permission to be absent for the week. I have completed my pending assignments and I will catchup with course syllabus and make sure my colleagues will pass me notes of the studies so to keep myself update to date.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
XYZXn
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a master' or simply 'masters'?
Suggestion: a master; masters
... uppal. The course I am studying is a masters in computer science in Data Science. I ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to abut'
Suggestion: to abut
... this conference would help me to learn abut various research opportunities availabl...
^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours sincerely, XYZXn
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72131147541 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72859729792 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581967213115 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7172204157 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248574143635 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871535932989 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415403411978 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137850715131 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529947245066 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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