You are doing a three-months' course at a training institute. You have recently been offered a full-time job at a company and you can not continue the course.
Write a letter to the course instructor. In the letter:
• explain why you cannot continue the course
• describe the job you have been offered
• and ask if they have an evening course that you can continue
Dear Mr. John,
I am the student of Project Management training course in your institution. I am writing to inform you that I cannot continue this course from 30th April onwards as I am due to start full-time job next week.
Let me explain the situation in detail. I have enrolled for three months course in your institution for Project Management training and I have just finished my first three weeks. Last week I got a call from one of the most reputed multinational company offering a full-time job and I am expected to start new job in 1st May. The working hours of my new job would contradict my class timings and hence I cannot continue this course. As a Planning Engineer I am expected to work from 9:00am to 6:00pm and new job means a lot of catch up.
I would like to request you to either transfer me to evening course or permit me to discontinue the course
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Rakesh Soni
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun catch seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of catches'.
Suggestion: a lot of catches
...from 9:00am to 6:00pm and new job means a lot of catch up. I would like to request you to e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54069767442 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58089116174 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8982477212 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279716103336 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982325156741 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738798154739 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172568377146 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285293857637 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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