You are due to star a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problem. Write a letter to your new employer .
- explain your situation.
- describe your problems.
- tell him/ her when you think can start the job.
Dear sir,
Greetings of the day. I am glad that I have been selected to serve the organization as a result of our fruitful interaction during the interview. However, I am writing this letter to explain my helplessness for not joining the job as per stipulated date mentioned in the offer letter which falls on 17th sept 2016.
I was suffering from the fever and stomach-ache since last few days so have been advised for the blood report by my physician. Today, when I received my blood report with the diagnoses of typhoid. Based on the blood report, I have been guided to hospitalised right away that didn't allow me a time to meet you in person and to explain about the circumstances.
As per the doctor's opinion, my disease will be cured in a span of 15 days which seems that I will be able to join my duties by 1st october 2016 instead of 17th Sept 2016. I would request you to extend my date of joining on the ground of health reason. Here, enclosed are the reports of diagnosis along with the medical certificate by the doctor for your kind perusal.
I regret for the inconvenience may caused due to the delay in my joining and requesting you for your kind cooperation.
Yours Faithfully
Bhumika suryavanshi
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Based on the blood report, I have been guided to hospitalised right away that didn't allow me a time to meet you in person and to explain about the circumstances.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and hospitalised
Sentence: I regret for the inconvenience may caused due to the delay in my joining and requesting you for your kind cooperation.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to may and caused
Sentence: As per the doctor's opinion, my disease will be cured in a span of 15 days which seems that I will be able to join my duties by 1st october 2016 instead of 17th Sept 2016.
Error: october Suggestion: October
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 220 350
No. of Characters: 974 1500
No. of Different Words: 131 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.851 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.427 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.627 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 60 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.923 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.358 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.308 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.32 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.726 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...when I received my blood report with the diagnoses of typhoid. Based on the blood...
^^
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... guided to hospitalised right away that didnt allow me a time to meet you in person a...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...about the circumstances. As per the doctors opinion, my disease will be cured in a ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e cured in a span of 15 days which seems that I will be able to join my duties by...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23829787234 0.220444632235 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.16170212766 0.167888034529 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0468085106383 0.0606518309736 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0297872340426 0.0506257000042 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0978723404255 0.118615021944 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.16170212766 0.107062808482 151% => OK
Participles: 0.068085106383 0.041066498444 166% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68829193614 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0340425531915 0.0385302599488 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0893617021277 0.0714148451538 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0170212765957 0.0191574576366 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0127659574468 0.00930345855455 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1236.0 1141.60824742 108% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.134020619 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64383561644 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.278538812785 0.284621296913 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205479452055 0.211203875043 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127853881279 0.133321485273 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0913242009132 0.0843313296314 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68829193614 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.622163163488 95% => OK
Word variations: 58.3386142193 62.8969750728 93% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9090909091 16.4300151701 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.170567467 44.7399317507 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.363636364 90.9928171075 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 16.4300151701 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.613754768223 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.09278350515 191% => OK
Readability: 40.4570361146 37.5504026743 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.61764705882 1.13073093955 143% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238655068681 0.331212695627 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103900831555 0.0927372745006 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0552251945464 0.0736520305886 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.641862229376 0.579516596996 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159762577896 0.180689518051 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969954511648 0.122183219658 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668589272202 0.0765303033291 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294184471213 0.211926503985 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0176197850584 0.0737400523855 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167507228987 0.203819188451 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209867690436 0.067151250289 31% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.48453608247 269% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.73195876289 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 1.03092783505 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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