Respected Sir,
Greetings of the day. I'm supposed to join and start work by next week, which is the 8th of January 2018. I regret to inform you that i will not be able to join work on the said date.
Sir unfortunately, my grandfather passed away today. He was sick and hospitalized for weeks. Since i have to relocate to start working in your company, i wouldn't be able to do so. Sir I'm his only grandchild and he had certain wishes, which i really want to fulfill. For me to complete all the rituals would take atleast a couple of weeks. I was really looking forward to my first day at work with excitement and enthusiasm. Sad demise of my beloved grandpa I wouldn't be able to make it on your said date. It would be kind of you, if you could allow me to join on the 23rd of January 2018.
I would be grateful if you could oblige to my request, considering the nature of the event.
Respectfully Your's,
Nelson Britto.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, so, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31428571429 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50292237358 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594285714286 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.8305634819 44.8134815571 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0769230769 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227414101395 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707282015496 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083096524845 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159285278751 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241233713114 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.