You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear sir or madam,
I am Harry Martin, appointed as an Accounts officer for your Greewich Branch. I was really excited to join the organisation and show my efforts and talent in terms of best work.Unfortunately, I would not be able to join on due date that is 26th june. I got stuck because of an unexpected medical emergency at my home. I am writing this letter to apologise for the same and request more time for joining.
Actually, Last week when my parents returned safely from holy journey of Budha Temple in Delhi, my mother suddenly got a heart stroke and we admitted her to AIIMS hospital, where initially her condition was very serious but doctors have confirmed that she is in stable condition now. However, she needs proper rest and care for next few months. As I am the only child of my parents, it is my duty to take care of my mother and make her fit and healthy as soon as possible.
I was really excited for my joining as the training part was very exciting and I wanted to face new challenges in my work but due to family conditions, I could not join on expected date. I hope you consider my family situation seriously and grant me to join your organisation next month.
I would be really grateful to you.
Your Sincerely,
Harry Martin
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| 2021-12-18 | shadow1222 | 73 | view |
| 2023-01-12 | msafaie | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear sir or madam, I am Harry Martin, appointed as an Accou...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...fforts and talent in terms of best work.Unfortunately, I would not be able to join on due dat...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...udha Temple in Delhi, my mother suddenly got a heart stroke and we admitted her t...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...er fit and healthy as soon as possible. I was really excited for my joining as t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e to join your organisation next month. I would be really grateful to you. ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...join your organisation next month. I would be really grateful to you. Y...
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Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I would be really grateful to you. Your Sincerely, Harry Martin
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly grateful to you. Your Sincerely, Harry Martin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53043478261 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.612880701 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617391304348 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3105104211 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7272727273 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158514506746 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719006207357 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660930480367 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110760730046 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562766396486 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.