Dear Suhana,
I hoe this letter finds you in sheer good health. I am pleased to inform you that my marriage has been fixed with a boy who I like and know since three years. His name is Gaurav Singh, he is also a Doctor indeed, we both met in the "Green Valley" Hospital around three years ago and gradually our friendship upgraded to immense love. Though, he belongs to a Punjabi family but our family members are quite supportive and optimistic about this relationship as he is extremely humble, honest, handsome person and seem to be a perfect match for me.
Furthermore, Wedding is on 8th December but Ring ceremony is on 6th December. My parents have been planning a lot for this day since long so, it is the time for them to make their dreams come true. Thus, they have arranged for a big fat glorified Indian Wedding which will be an excellent blend of western and traditional programmes. For instance, there will be a Musical night on 7th December in which a popular Bollywood singer is going to perform. Last but not the least, you will be able to taste a slew of savoury dishes which are rare to find in Canada.
I am very keen to see you in all the functions because you have been my best friend since seventeen years and I want to share my happiness about this significant event of my life with people who are close to my heart.
Eagerly awaiting your prompt reply.
See you soon,
Rachna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xtremely humble, honest, handsome person and seem to be a perfect match for me. ...
^^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting your prompt reply. See you soon, Rachna
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52713178295 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45235838632 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647286821705 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.590840892 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110639889623 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480951367624 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420920097612 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675419797396 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234301661336 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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