Dear James,
It has been long since we last met but I am sure you are doing fine. I am writing his letter to inform you that I have incredible news for both of us. Recently, I read an article stating that there is an institution "Green Valley" which is going to organise an event on 22nd December in New Delhi to recruit Maths teachers for their college. It is located in London and indeed is a very prestigious college there.
Moreover, it will be quite convenient to participate as the process is simple and less time consuming. The selection will be done based on the interviews and in fact, result will be declared on the same evening. According to the article, wages are extremely attractive however, it is a temporary job. But, if they will be satisfied by our work than there is high probability of attaining a permanent position as well.
As, we both aspire to settle abroad, I assume this is our best chance to fulfil our dreams. Since, we both are experienced and highly qualified candidates, I strongly believe that we will inevitably get this job. Also, we need to financially support our families indeed, you are the sole bread winner of yours, you must not let go this opportunity.
Awaiting your expedite reply.
See you soon,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear James, It has been long since we last met but I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73873873874 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6939799179 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8465587026 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9230769231 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226717027195 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668934705398 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582118485827 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114361830598 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720224687955 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.