You are going to another country to study.
You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Hello, I'm at pink of my health and hope you're sailing in the same boat. Gladly, I have got an admission at the University of London for CPA , so I would be there in the following month. Basically, this course is a sandwich course which would last for two years and after this, I can embark my own Accounting and Taxation practices.
Sadly , the dynamic conditions of Indian Economy has given death blow to most of the local traders, hence our ancestral business is not so much profitable and it has put us in financial scarcity. Therefore, this temporary employment would be conductive in drawing out some adequate amount to meet my living expenses there. Apart from above, pragmatic working experience would pave of luminous career ahead.
You have been working in London since 2011, so you should have very cordial relations with some renowned organisations. It would be highly grateful it you find a suitable part time work for me.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Take care and stay fine.
Best wishes,
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Hello, Im at pink of my health and hope youre sai...
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Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...Hello, Im at pink of my health and hope youre sailing in the same boat. Gladly, I hav...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sion at the University of London for CPA , so I would be there in the following mo...
^^
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ically, this course is a sandwich course which would last for two years and after...
^^
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ounting and Taxation practices. Sadly , the dynamic conditions of Indian Econom...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e would pave of luminous career ahead. You have been working in London since 2...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pave of luminous career ahead. You have been working in London since 2011, ...
^^
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... highly grateful it you find a suitable part time work for me. I look forward to hear...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ul it you find a suitable part time work for me. I look forward to hearing fro...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86440677966 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5396085201 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.723163841808 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7062587129 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193608821884 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642927663308 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667235911421 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113535526144 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767586242143 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.