You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Dear Anna,
How are you going? I hope everything is fine with you. In the near future, I am transferring to Taiwan for higher education and would like your guidance regarding a part-time job.
I will be coming to Taiwan next month for a master’s program in Physics Engineering at NCKU. My class schedule is quite flexible because I have not registered for so many courses in the first semester. I would like to work part-time while pursuing my study so that I can get some experience, which will be beneficial for my career in the future. In Taiwan, there is a lot of semiconductor companies that are very famous in the world. If I work part-time in an expert environment, I have more opportunities to improve technical knowledge and apply the theories to practice skills. In addition, I will get to learn about Taiwan’s work culture and communicate network with partners. These experiences will be helpful for me to find a full-time job after graduation.
You have been working in Taiwan’s semiconductor industry for the last 10 years. I think you will have a lot of connections in this field. Therefore, you will be a great mentor who could give advice and help me in looking for a part-time job.
I would love to hear from you and get some detailed information about Taiwan’s companies. Give my best to everyone in your family.
Best regards,
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ur guidance regarding a part-time job. I will be coming to Taiwan next month for...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76824034335 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90361665914 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2893563065 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334420207611 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105691335449 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856198258733 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227720628523 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864590024872 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ur guidance regarding a part-time job. I will be coming to Taiwan next month for...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76824034335 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90361665914 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2893563065 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334420207611 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105691335449 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856198258733 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227720628523 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864590024872 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.