You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Hi James,
My departure date for Canada is drawing near; moreover, I am busy in doing my arrangement. I would be grateful if you could help me in finding a part-time job as I have very less time to search for a job.
I have enrolled for a full-time course in IDT-Institute in Ottawa, which is for four months. I need to join immediately after my departure day. The course is quite expensive; but, it will help me in improving my skills which helps me in finding a better career opportunity.
To assist in covering the cost of my study, accommodation, food and other daily expenses, I aim to find a part-time job as soon as possible. Not only the study fee but also, others are too expensive to afford individually.
I would wonder if you could ask among your colleagues, friends in other companies to see if they have at least a minimum job. So, that it helps me to survive in the initial days. I know you have wide range of social network in Ottawa which you could do canvas for me, if you would mind.
I look forward to seeing you soon
Thanking you.
Best Wishes,
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te in Ottawa, which is for four months. I need to join immediately after my depar...
^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ee if they have at least a minimum job. So, that it helps me to survive in the initial d...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, as for, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63649388393 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6002238912 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296005919868 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988967132738 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948618519605 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151393623243 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993793212389 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.