You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Pankti,
As I write this letter, my first thoughts are to your well-being. How are you? I hope everything is good on your side. As you know, I have received an acceptance letter from Columbia University for Masters in Genetics and soon I'll fly to New York. I'll truly appreciate your help.
I just received a letter from the program director which states my schedule and as per that I will be free on weekends. also I won't have college after 3:00 pm which can either be used in merry-making or doing some odd jobs. I'm planning for shift jobs that do not clash with my classes and give me ample amount of time to study.
The money that I earn from my job will be for my personal use and I won't have to ask my parents for it. Also, it'll make me independent and as you know i'm quite dependent on my parents, even for the smallest need.
Since you're living in new york and aware about job situation; you'll be able to find an apt workplace for me. I'll reach new york in first week of January and your help will be much appreciated.
I'm eagerly waiting for your reply. Give my regards to Dhruv.
With lots of love,
Tasneem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ersity for Masters in Genetics and soon Ill fly to New York. Ill truly appreciate y...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... Genetics and soon Ill fly to New York. Ill truly appreciate your help. I just re...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...as per that I will be free on weekends. also I wont have college after 3:00 pm which...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...as per that I will be free on weekends. also I wont have college after 3:00 pm which...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...in merry-making or doing some odd jobs. Im planning for shift jobs that do not cla...
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Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ts, even for the smallest need. Since youre living in new york and aware about job ...
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Line 9, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...new york and aware about job situation; youll be able to find an apt workplace for me...
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Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...e able to find an apt workplace for me. Ill reach new york in first week of January...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d your help will be much appreciated. Im eagerly waiting for your reply. Give my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30841121495 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28315385162 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0944156285 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4666666667 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252393609036 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927752824346 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551523256575 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142341278174 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06590081631 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.