You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Give details of your study plans
- Explain why you want to get a part-time job
- Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
DEAR TOM,
HELLO, HOW ARE YOU? I HOPE YOU FIND THIS LETTER IN GOOD HEALTH. YOU WOULD BE SURPRISED TO KNOW THAT I HAVE PLANNED TO ENROLL IN OXFORD UNIVERSITY OF YOUR REGION AND WILL BE LANDING THERE SOON.
LAST YEAR I HAD APPLIED FOR THE ENGLISH LITERACY COURSE IN THE OXFORD UNIVERSITY. FORTUNATELY, AFTER A LONG WAIT I HAVE BEEN INVITED TO JOIN BY AUGUST 2020. IT IS A SIX MONTH FULL TIME COURSE. BASICALLY, I WILL BE HAVING MY CLASSES FROM EARLY MORNING TO MID DAY. AFTER THE COLLEGE HOURS I AM NOT OCCUPIED WITH ANY KIND OF WORK FOR THE REST OF THE DAY. IN ADDITION TO THIS, YOU KNOW THESE UNIVERSITY PROGRAMS ARE QUITE EXPENSIVE. THEREFORE, I WAS THINKING TO SEARCH FOR SOME JOB AND WORK IN THOSE HOURS. AS A RESULT OF THIS I WILL NOT ONLY UTILISE THE FREE TIME BUT ALSO SAVE FEW BUCKS FOR MY FEES.
I HAD A CONVERSATIONS WITH ON OF THE RECRUITERS RECENTLY. THEY HAVE SUGGESTED ME TO ARRANGE A REFERENCE LETTER FROM ONE OF THE NATIVE EMPLOYERS WHICH WILL EASE MY PROCESS OF RECRUITMENT. I COULDN’T THINK OF SOMEONE BETTER THAN YOU SINCE YOU HAVE BEEN LIVING AND MANAGING A COMPANY OVER THERE SINCE 10 YEARS. I HOPE YOU EMPATHISE WITH SITUATION AND WILL HELP ME FASTENING THIS PROCESS EVENTUALLY.
YOURS FAITHFULLY
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... THAT I HAVE PLANNED TO ENROLL IN OXFORD UNIVERSITY OF YOUR REGION AND WILL BE LA...
^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
... JOIN BY AUGUST 2020. IT IS A SIX MONTH FULL TIME COURSE. BASICALLY, I WILL BE HAVING MY ...
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Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to fasten' or 'fasten'.
Suggestion: To fasten; Fasten
...PATHISE WITH SITUATION AND WILL HELP ME FASTENING THIS PROCESS EVENTUALLY. YOURS FAITHF...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, in addition, kind of, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50892857143 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54884912379 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9201211268 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3333333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253253876399 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797336503664 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668428771033 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183910232553 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734372484175 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.