You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear James,
Hope you are in the pink of your health. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have joined the University of the Netherlands and I am coming to your city. Let me explain you in detail.
I had applied for a few universities for my Masters Programs and out of which I have received a response from the stated university. also, the university is providing me with full-time scholarship and accommodation as well. However, I would like to take up a part-time job owing to the reason that I do not want to burden up my parents with extra expenses since they have to take care of my little siblings and grandparents also. I want to help them financially and will soon be taking up their responsibilities. Therefore, I want your support for the same.
I would require your help to find me a part-time job as you are aware of the city and you must be having friends who can refer me to get a job.
Looking forward to your response.
Best regards
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... a response from the stated university. also, the university is providing me with fu...
^^^^
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... of my little siblings and grandparents also. I want to help them financially and wi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38888888889 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75813051733 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9660463773 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8181818182 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371490102614 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130799790492 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107867954462 0.0603063233224 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233028338933 0.12726935374 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123290919188 0.0580467560999 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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