You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events organizer.
Write a letter to the training organizer
• Expressing your interest in the role
• Requesting more information about it
• Explaining what experience you have
I am one of the participant due to attend in the training programme in UK and would like to express my willingness to be acted as social event organizer in the group.
In the past, I had organized many social gatherings similar to this kind of events and recently organized Christmas celebration event in the office is prime example to show my event arrangement capabilities. As I heard from many of my coworkers, it was one of the most successful social gathering organized in the history of our company. Everyone thoroughly enjoyed the occasion and as an appreciation token, I had received a certificate from my senior management for the success of the event. Please refer attached copy of the same for your reference purpose.
If you select me as an event organizer I shall prepare a programme prior to our departure to the UK to discuss with you. However, in order to prepare this schedule I would like to receive details of budget allocation for the event and our full detailed programme of training. These are the critical details required to preplan activities of the social event. Furthermore, if you could advise facilities we can receive from our hotels at free of cost would ease the unnecessary expenses.
Again, I would like to reiterate my enthusiasm to act as a social event organizer in the group. I look forward to receive favorable response.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
... organizer in the group. I look forward to receive favorable response.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88049721867 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542735042735 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4718149012 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.818181818 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277218860742 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106992622946 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103506003095 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200309814611 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111706795644 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.