You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter,
explain your situation
describe the accommodation you require
say when you will need it
Dear Sir or Madam,
This letter has been written to inform you that I am going to join a 3 months trainee course initiated by your institute in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. As I have already gone through your course curriculum but there is nothing mentioned about an accommodation.
Could you please find a nice dwelling place for me? What I am looking for is the furnished independent room with attached bathroom and kitchen. It will be better if it is near my trainee organisation otherwise try to find a living area within few kilometres where public transport is easily accessible so that I can reach the school on time.
Your trainee course will commence on the 15th of August and I will be there on the 13th of August. It would be very great if you can find such accommodation within the time or before my arrival.
Hope to get a positive reply from you.
Yours Faithfully,
John Hopkins
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...um but there is nothing mentioned about an accommodation. Could you please find a nice dwel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81761006289 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68752963764 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710691823899 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7182866535 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231760486533 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884842768732 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718246042475 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133743259827 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803023452732 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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