You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to this friend in your letter
In your letter
• Introduce Yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring)
Dear Paul,
I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit. Let me introduce myself, I am a maternal cousin of your friend, Barbara from India. This letter is for asking some information about your current city. Barbara mentioned me that you have been residing in Venice for 15 years. As I have never been to Italy before, Barbara had suggested me to take some advice from you.
I had planned a family trip to Venice in the starting of next month because we shall have a long weekend during that time-period.
We are coming for five days. I need some information on main tourist attractions of the city. My parents like gardens and shopping, it would be very much appreciative, if you could tell me the best places in this context. Moreover, it would be great, if you could also suggest about some areas to explore in our leisure times. We are not much aware of the weather conditions there, it would be excellent if you could also suggest the type of clothes that we should bring or any other thing that should be carried along with the luggage.
I will be grateful if you could spare some time to guide me on this trip.
I look forward to your response.
Yours Sincerely,
Harman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58986175115 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34347995942 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7381437547 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1428571429 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26991269373 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999317699691 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667067153999 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131676002509 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107012721718 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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