You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to this friend in your letter
In your letter
• Introduce Yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring
Dear Anish,
How are you? i hope this letter finds you well. I' m writing to ask you about the places to visit in your country. You might not know me. I'm the maternal cousin of your high school friend ram. Being a resident of Chennai, I'm planning to visit your country, Singapore for this winter. Every year i used to visit different places in India. And thsi time i've made up my mind to visit Singapore which is a new city for me. But my father was working there in 2010. And now I'm coming there to attend the wedding of my dad's friend's daughter, Nila which falls on 23rd of december. Since i have visa for a period one month, I've planned to stay till the end of the month.
Is Singapore a beatiful city? When I surfed the website, I came cross many places like the Bird's Park, the Marine Bay and the zoo of Singapore. Does Singapore have any hill station? And, how about the climate there? If you tell me about the things that are needed to survive in Singapore, it will be easy for me to start my purchase for the trip. Though i know my dad's friend, I would like to wander with you in Singapore, as ram had told many positive things about you. Reply me if you'll be free in this december.
Waiting to hear back from you soon.
Warm regards,
Gayathri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...riend ram. Being a resident of Chennai, Im planning to visit your country, Singapo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26556016598 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10642939989 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618257261411 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5884373744 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.4 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.05 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.85 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.94845360825 279% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246705693263 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748817253525 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806429133642 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153001591506 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814120015153 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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