You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to this friend in your letter
In your letter
• Introduce Yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring
Dear Anish,
how are you? you might not know me. I'm the maternal cousin of your high school friend ram. Being a resident of chennai, I'm planning to visit your country, singapore for this winter.
Every year i used to visit different places in India. singapore is a new city for me to visit. But my father was working there in 2010. And now I'm coming there to attend the wedding of my dad's friend's daughter, Nila which falls on 23rd of december. Since i have visa for a period one month, I have planned to stay till the end of the month.
Is singapore a beatiful city? When I surfed the website, I came cross many places like the bird's park, the marine bay and the zoo of singapore. Does singapore have any hill station? And, how about the climate in singapore? if you tell me about the things that are required to survive in singapore, it will be easy for me to start my purchase for the trip. Though i know my dad's friend, I would like to wander with you in singapore, as ram had told many positive things about you. Reply me if you'll be free in this december.
Waiting to hear back from you soon.
Warm regards,
Gayathri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Anish, how are you? you might not know me. Im t...
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Suggestion: You
Dear Anish, how are you? you might not know me. Im the maternal cous...
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Suggestion: I'm
... how are you? you might not know me. Im the maternal cousin of your high school...
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Suggestion: I'm
...riend ram. Being a resident of chennai, Im planning to visit your country, singapo...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... for this winter. Every year i used to visit different places in India...
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Suggestion: Singapore
...sed to visit different places in India. singapore is a new city for me to visit. But my f...
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Suggestion: I'm
...ther was working there in 2010. And now Im coming there to attend the wedding of m...
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Suggestion: visaed
...falls on 23rd of december. Since i have visa for a period one month, I have planned ...
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Suggestion: If
...nd, how about the climate in singapore? if you tell me about the things that are r...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... start my purchase for the trip. Though i know my dads friend, I would like to wa...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... positive things about you. Reply me if youll be free in this december. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50704225352 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20361403874 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638497652582 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0108008489 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.3333333333 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8333333333 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193832074884 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576227666075 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584558411943 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133484282268 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963648769027 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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