You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence.
Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. In your letter
*give your accommodation requirements
*explain what your food needs are
*ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regards to my accommodation that college Hall of Residence offer.
I am going to be a first year student of your college and I would like to apply for the room at your campus.
I would like to have a single or maximum double bed room with en suite bathroom, kitchen can be share. My diet is vegetarian so I would appreciate in case the room would be double to stay with another vegetarian. That would be really helpful for both of us I guess.
Moreover, I am athlete, so I need to have regular meals during my week. According to this it would be helpful if the kitchen will be close to the room.
However, if your campus cannot offer me accommodation that I am looking for I would be humbly grateful for any suggestion where I could find something that will suite my needs.
I am look forward to hearing from you
You faithful,
Tomasz Zawadzki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o apply for the room at your campus. I would like to have a single or maximum ...
^
Line 23, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to hearing from you You faithful, Tomasz Zawadzki
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48214285714 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50178507699 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8464214787 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20231536845 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894964342696 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081013635643 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120626387269 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883492612626 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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