Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to inquire about renting an apartment for a small vacation. I have seen your contact detail which is provided on the website of your company. Actually, I am planning to spend my vacation in Singapore. I am looking for a small apartment with kitchen, tv, and fridge. If you do not mind then please do me your favor for this living area which consists balcony with sea view, Where I can spend my valuable time with my food.
Because I have a long weekend vacation at the end of the next June, I am planning to be there. In Singapore, I will enjoy my holiday for about 5 days and in between, you can arrange vegetarian food for me then It would be great for me.
During the Summer, the price of the all hotel and tourist company is been going to raise. Because of my small budget, I can not afford the large amount for accommodation hence If you can share your price information with me then I can book my holiday trip with you as soon as possible.
I would be grateful if you could arrange my trip with the desired accommodation. I am waiting for your valuable response with all required details.
Kind regards,
Nikunj
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- There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter• describe the complaints tha 89
- You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there.Write a letter to the tourist information office.In your letter:explain what you needsay when you plan to be thereask for information about pri 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... landing in Singapore at early morning o 13th July and will directly move into th...
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Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: with
...l details of available apartments along with with their per day cost including tax and ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40291262136 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50139465293 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5482912416 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192324577604 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780238345473 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06714797043 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115549946446 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458067192362 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.