You are going to write a letter to ask for the refund of a deposit that you have made.
Dear Ms. Montgomery,
I am writing to request a refund of my deposit on two round trip tickets on the boat from Houghton to Isle Royale. We were to depart on July 10 for the island and return to Houston on July 18. My mother and I have had to cancel our vacation plans due to an illness in the family.
I have paid a deposit fee of $200 per ticket, for a total of $400 (listed under the reference number: ABC9876). I understand that we are still entitled to a full refund ten days before the departure date.
Please send the refund to me at the address below. We are very sorry not to be able to go on this trip. We have had many enjoyable vacations on Inani beach and Cox's Bazar in the past. I hope that we will be able to return next year.
Sincerely,
Tahmeed Rahman
Phone: 8801617598929
Email: tahmeed93rahman@gmail.com
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-08-15 | tahmeed1993 | 61 | view |
- People today are selfish and greedy. They think only about improving their own lives rather than others in the society. Do you agree? 73
- Many people believe that it is the responsibility of only the government to develop the country Others believe that the individual as well as local societies should play a part What is your opinion 73
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option What sort of punishment should parents and te 52
- The following is from an editorial in the Midvale Observer, a local newspaper."Ever since the 1950's, when television sets began to appear in the average home, the rate ofcrimes committed by teenagers in the country of Alta has steadily increase 82
- Online education and training is becoming increasingly popular in the business world. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38709677419 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84512471632 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658064516129 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.235281588 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155438178602 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503074996733 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359406483128 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520381618587 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549895191337 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.