You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you Write a letter to your friend In your letter 1 Say where and when the class will be held 2 Give reasons why you think your friend might be inter

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You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1- Say where and when the class will be held
2- Give reasons why you think your friend might be interested
3- Suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea
Write at least 150 words.

Hope you and your parents are doing excellent. I am sorry that I have not been in touch with you for the last couple of weeks. Even if I have not written to you for a while, you are always in my thoughts and prayer. I am writing to you today because I need your expertise to translate some important documents for me.

you would be glad to know that my application has been accepted by the Wuhan university in China and if things go as planned, I will join the university next summer for my Master's degree. They have sent me some documents which are in the chinese language and I need your help with that. you are the best person to assist me and this is really crucial for me to get admitted to this university. Without the proper translation of the documents, I will not be able to respond precisely to them.

I am sending xerox copies of these documents, three documents with 7 pages in total, and would really appreciate if you can send them before 10th December. I could use Google translate to interpret the texts but you know there are always glitches in this technology as some meanings are lost in translation! Your excellent skills in English and chinese makes you the most suitable person to translate those documents for me. I owe you a big one.

Take care and write me back whenever possible.

Warm wishes,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: You
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48971193416 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47541040878 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559670781893 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6121903507 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9166666667 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220249072733 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868993696788 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468696507611 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131556831477 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673099413178 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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