Dear Zalak,
I hope you doing well. I am writing this letter to invite to the in my cooking class.
Moreover, I am recently join the sigma institute I which is located in the Vadodara. I am give a admissions in the cooking field further more, my basic interest in the cooking. My admission done 2 weeks ago I learnt so many delicious dishes as well as mouth watering. And the previous students held cooking classes on every Sunday.
However I am summon u join this college. Because I know that u r little bit interest in cooking .I am asking u for this purpose because since we are hostel parter in our college day some times you make different types of dishes in the room.
I am also ask you for this reason because you are basically form Baroda this college situated in the near by Karajan and the college provide transportation also. So it is easy for to came in the college . I am living in the hostel.
Once we met and discuss about the course. I am explain all the thing which is related to this course. We will met in this tuesday in the evening because every tuedsday I have no extra class. We are going to cafe for discussing this matter. I hope you free on that day.
While discussing for this course. The faculty is very high professional and highly experienced. This college some rule are strict but the professors are very friendly. They are teach to different different types of dishes (like Thai, Mexican , Chinese ,Gujarati and punjabi ) I am heartily invites to join this college.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully,
Urja Manan shah
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59285714286 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48520596322 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.364785008 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2380952381 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 47.0 2.54639175258 1846% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160584937745 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502039421299 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567462568595 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902789678081 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567701049937 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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