You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
say where and when the class will be held
give reasons why you think your friend might be interested
suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sara,
How are you and how is everyone doing in your family? Hoping that everyone must be their lives to the fullest. Recently I came across an advertisement of cooking classes being held at "Serena polytechnic college" commencing from next Friday. Training shall be provided by experienced and professional chefs currently serving at 5 star hotels. I have also developed interest for cooking because I am getting married in 3 months and you have naturally blessed with this inborn talent. In my stance, We should definitely avail this golden opportunity without a second thought.
The first person that came across my mind after going through the advert was you because I clearly remember how much you loved preparing meals and desserts for me and your siblings. In addition, we used to absolutely cherish and enjoy your talent and you always stated that you wanted to adopt cookery as your profession.
I was wondering if you could pay me a visit this weekend at my apartment, so that we could discuss the admission protocols and documents required to be submitted. I shall be back by 3 from local store after doing my groceries so you could visit at that time.
Eagerly looking forward to seeing you at my place. We shall revive some old memories followed by a tempting dinner made by me. Do write me back expressing your thoughts regarding this course and wether you will be visiting my place or not. Feeling really excited to meet you in person.
Warm Wishes,
Sana.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and you always stated that you wanted to adopt cookery as your profession. I w...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eries so you could visit at that time. Eagerly looking forward to seeing you at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, regarding, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91732283465 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6500040651 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645669291339 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5775773331 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292096834294 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924514296736 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591121764037 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181435854674 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346683428434 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.