You are looking for a full-time job and recently you saw a job opening in an advertisement.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain what sort of job you would like
• and say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir,
My name is Truong Nguyen. Lately, I have been looking for a full-time job as a computer engineer and I found one position in your company last night on Linkedin.com. Therefore, I am writing this letter regarding to the appliance for the job opening.
Allow me to get straight to the point. I have just graduated this summer from Bach Khoa University with the bachelor degree of Computer Engineering. To be more specific, my field is internet security and I have experience in filtering online database virus. Although I do not have working experience since I have just graduated as I mentioned earlier, I can provide two certifications of my internships last year which were signed by the directors of two famous companies in Ho Chi Minh City.
These are brief information about myself. I will provide full paperwork if you request.
I am looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Truong N
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92297227313 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703225806452 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1151787051 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4545454545 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186784889676 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603688533753 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610932014443 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105416295817 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578129808024 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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