You are looking for a house. Write a letter to house agent describing.
1 When you want to move in
2 why you are moving
3 Your family and type of accommodation you are looking for.
Dear Mr Paul,
My name is Pallvi Singla. I have been writing this letter to describe you about our choice of home that we are looking for.
Me and my husband wanted to move in the beginning of the following month including our two children. We had already sold our current residency to another family. Therefore, we have to vacant the house by the end of this month.
Fortunately, my husband got a new job at civic hospital in Brampton and our recent place is two hours drive from his future job. So, it will be hard for him to commute four hours daily. Finally, we decided to locate near by.
For now, We have been looking for a two bedroom house around the hospital with garage. A place around the garden and a kinder garden is most preferable. Although, it will be great if is near the city centre. You can contact us at your earliest convenience with the options of homes. We are looking forward for the reply.
Yours sincerely,
Pallvi Singla
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| 2019-06-24 | Pallvi singla | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...rs daily. Finally, we decided to locate near by. For now, We have been looking for a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54022988506 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31959035294 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9011797025 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.4285714286 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4285714286 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210424667086 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668435028889 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857284869217 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132545505098 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991300251256 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.16 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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