You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you think you could start
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to apply for a part-time job for the position of assistant coach at your prestigious soccer club which I saw in an advertisement in a local newspaper. My name is Mathew and I am a student at the university of Perth and have been living in Perth for over a decade.
I have previously played at school and university clubs at the position of centre-forward and have played a pivotal role in some crucial wins and helping my university win some champions league.I have also worked as an assistant coach with the school football club. I have knowledge about the game and what it takes to win matches as in my past life we won many university championships apart from this I have a great passion for this beautiful game. If given a chance I will bring a lot of experience and skill which I have acquired and will be of a great asset to your football club.
I am immediately able to join the club if selected and I look forward to your response
Yours sincerely
Vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to apply for a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
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...my university win some champions league.I have also worked as an assistant coach ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt coach with the school football club. I have knowledge about the game and what ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cted and I look forward to your response Yours sincerely Vinshu
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to your response Yours sincerely Vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47027027027 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74674387215 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556756756757 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4623439649 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.833333333 76.5299724578 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 16.8248392259 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165606867708 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879884006587 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044517496791 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11444048871 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115790293166 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.