You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you think you could start
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in a part-time job at your club which was published in the last week’s newspaper. I have experience as a soccer coach in several schools and, therefore, I would like to apply for this place in your esteemed club.
I am particularly interested in mentoring students of age group under 16 because I have spent a significant number of years for training teenagers. This age group needs ability and patience for coaching as young children are incredibly moody and sully. Additionally, I am especially keen on teaching various soccer skills such as dribbling and passing. This is because I used to play as a striker during my childhood and I had taken specialized training to learn the hacks and tricks of the striker position. So I think that my knowledge and learning would be highly useful for participants to develop these skills.
I am available to start this job from next week onwards. Moreover, I have attached my Curriculum Vitae. However, if you need further details, please do not hesitate to contact me. I would be willing to discuss my application at the interview.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Heena Shah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...or this place in your esteemed club. I am particularly interested in mentoring...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93236714976 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86830434733 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6551068777 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5384615385 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17329249235 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560133079547 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499929016513 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119526440274 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519786336826 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.