You are a member of a local gym. Recently, there has been a problem in the changing area. You have reported this to the staff several times, but no action was taken. Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter
• describe the problem in the changing area
• explain who you reported the problem to before
• suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to complaint about an issue that I am facing in the changing area. I am member of your gym from the last six months and enjoying every facility except the one I want you to address. This has been reported on several occasions to your staff members, however, no action taken yet.
To begin with, the working condition of fan is not appropriate. In summers, the weather conditions makes it intolerable to change clothes over there. Now, season has been shifted from winters to summers so it is making more suffocating to get in the changing area.
Furthermore, this drawback has been conveyed to your management plethora of times but nothing seems to work here. Mr. Thompson from your staff informed me that maintenance will be done but everything is in vain. Now, it is really getting on my nerves.
I would really appreciate, if you can have a look over the situation to rectify it on priority. At the same time, gym can be kept closed on weekend to fix the problem. Moreover, I want you to give feedback to your team for not entertaining request of gym members as it is their responsibility to take action on time.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Urvashi
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...season has been shifted from winters to summers so it is making more suffocating to get...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73732718894 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63625888366 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640552995392 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9715517239 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4285714286 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402153199769 0.216113520407 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102147353747 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708845191481 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172850511703 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105105186808 0.0580467560999 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...season has been shifted from winters to summers so it is making more suffocating to get...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73732718894 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63625888366 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640552995392 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9715517239 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4285714286 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402153199769 0.216113520407 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102147353747 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708845191481 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172850511703 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105105186808 0.0580467560999 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.