You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe what went wrong with the meal and service
• suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Mr. Johnatthon,
This is in connection with the recent disappointment I had while I was with my foreign delegates at your restaurant for lunch. I am a privileged member of your restaurant and do have at least 5-6 meeting in a month. The lunch of 10th July 2019, was not served well neither with the food nor service.
Before planning the lunch meeting, I particularly called up the restaurant and told the manager that one of my clients is allergic to the curd and its usage in any of the food preparation. In spite of the clear instructions, we were served a starter which was made from curd only. After eating the food, my client had food poisoning and was admitted to the hospital. Before the food was served, I again checked about the allergic food but the waiter replied in an inappropriate manner and told that none of the food has the curd.
I am very disappointed with the service and behaviour of the restaurant and would expect the reimbursement of the hospital bill of my client as it would not only regain my confidence but would also give an example of being a loyal customer.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Thanking you.
Yours sincerely,
Megha Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an inappropriate manner" with adverb for "inappropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...he allergic food but the waiter replied in an inappropriate manner and told that none of the food has the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, well, while, at least, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64285714286 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7093899038 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0926689905 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145047845379 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704808227531 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547810289816 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637497945299 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509491993522 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.