You are not satisfied with the changing room in a sports centre that you visit. Write s letter to the sports centre manager.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the condition of the changing room at a sports centre. I am giving yoga classes at this sports centre since one year.
I want to bring your attention that the condition of the changing room is below level. Firstly, there is no proper drainage system for the water. Secondly, there is a horrible smell in the changing rooms most of the time. It seems that the rooms are not being cleaned properly by the cleaning staff. Moreover, some of the tiles on the floor are broken and paint has been removed from the walls. Last but not least, some of the doors are not looked accurately and sometimes it is creating obstacles for the girls and women.
I would like you to ensure that rooms are cleaned on a regular basis and room freshener is also provided to the cleaning staff. Install ventilators in the rooms to prevent the foul smell and keep the environment of the sports centre healthy.
I would like to receive a prompt response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Ravi.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-05-02 | Ravi Grewal | 73 | view |
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Suggestion:
...ponse from your side. Yours faithfully, Ravi.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67204301075 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42713801821 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5682681748 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4166666667 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28005195768 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796113701685 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851224795302 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149206084526 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116450770508 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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