You are organising a family party.
Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to attend the party. In your letter:
- explain why you are organising a party
- say why you want your friend to come to the party
- describe what you are planning to do
Dear Sarah,
The following weekend, I'm gonna throw a going away party at my house, and you are invited. Let me first clear myself that I won't take no for an answer! You must be there!
A couple of days ago, my final IELTS test result arrived, und fortunately, I got a fantastic 8, which was exactly my dream score for emigrating to my my dream country, Canada. To make a longer story short, I have finally received my invitation and I'll soon leave the country for good. So, so I thought having a party would be great before flying to Toronto.
As you know, I've had such close relationships with you and all others of our classmates at university, you've always been kind and supported to me and leaving you guys without saying goodbye would kill me. I do hope you all can make it to the party.
Also, I'm sure will be spending an amazing time together. There will be a great DJ, lots of good food and drinks and more. There also is gonna be a fun competition which you will find out yourself; it's gonna be fantastic, I'm sure of it.
Keep in touch,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sarah, The following weekend, Im gonna throw a going away party at my ho...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: my
...xactly my dream score for emigrating to my my dream country, Canada. To make a longer...
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Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...have finally received my invitation and Ill soon leave the country for good. So, so...
^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...fore flying to Toronto. As you know, Ive had such close relationships with you a...
^^^
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
...others of our classmates at university, youve always been kind and supported to me an...
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Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... all can make it to the party. Also, Im sure will be spending an amazing time t...
^^
Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ition which you will find out yourself; its gonna be fantastic, Im sure of it. K...
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Line 9, column 222, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d out yourself; its gonna be fantastic, Im sure of it. Keep in touch, Jack
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36683417085 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34887939522 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693467336683 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3690983316 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15648047506 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595448519334 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575128030393 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100027610773 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666213715239 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.