You are organising a trip to Paris, France for a group of students from England.
Write to the manager of the Youth Hostel Association in Paris. In your letter, explain
when you want to visit Paris
how long you will stay
how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I am arriving there to explore the Paris city on August 8th, 2019 with a group of young students accompanying. I have already made flight booking to fly to Paris from London, England early morning at 6:00 AM on August 8th. As per flight schedule, we will reach airport by 9:00 PM, and after getting luggage, we will be heading to your place, Youth Hostal, Paris.
As per trip itinerary, the stay will be initially for two weeks and four days including arriving and departure day, but there is possibilty that it could be extended to three weeks. Because we are planning to visit entire city having less time, it can be considered that longer stay is expected.
In total, we are fourteen young students and all are above eighteen. If we talk about age category, I think we all should be considered as adults. We need lowest room category with a double bed and heating facility included in all compartments. Moreover, we will be having breakfast and dinner at the hotel restaurant.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as sson as possible.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'need the lowest'.
Suggestion: need the lowest
... all should be considered as adults. We need lowest room category with a double bed and hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70351758794 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52029964593 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663316582915 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0865100493 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152852032661 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582673252477 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451053274131 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901848641242 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551936347166 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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