An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your IELTS studies are going.
Write a letter telling your friend how you are preparing for the test.
In your letter:
• say what progress you are making
• explain how you are preparing for the test
• say which section you are finding the most difficult
Dear Rini,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter in response to your letter asking me about my IELTS preparation.
It is difficult to manage study and job together but I have decided to settle in Canada but I need to give IELTS exam hence, I initiated my study and joined evening classes. The starting was quite disappointing but with practice, I crossed many milestones.
The academy I joined use to arrange mock tests every Saturdays hence, I always make sure that I should appear in it. Apart from this, I have joined online tutorial classes and paid for online tests so that I can utilize my Sundays by doing the study.
I am trying my best in all the modules and attaining the desired bands but still, I am facing problems in the writing section. I took guidance from my tutor she told me sometimes it takes time. If you have a kind of opinion please do write to me.
Warm Regards,
Jot
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-09-10 | Ramandeep Dhaliwal | 73 | view |
| 2020-04-12 | kjot_59 | 73 | view |
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ny milestones. The academy I joined use to arrange mock tests every Saturdays h...
^^^
Line 8, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or she told me sometimes it takes time. If you have a kind of opinion please do wr...
^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...do write to me. Warm Regards, Jot
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, well, apart from, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52046783626 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3672872891 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7984750267 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2727272727 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219120729825 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865215957676 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941335288821 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131315564115 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132060920076 0.0580467560999 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ny milestones. The academy I joined use to arrange mock tests every Saturdays h...
^^^
Line 8, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or she told me sometimes it takes time. If you have a kind of opinion please do wr...
^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...do write to me. Warm Regards, Jot
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, well, apart from, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52046783626 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3672872891 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672514619883 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7984750267 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2727272727 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219120729825 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865215957676 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941335288821 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131315564115 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132060920076 0.0580467560999 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.