You are organising a trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales for a group of students from Perth in Western Australia.
Write to the manager of Student Hostel Services. In your letter, explain:
when you want to visit the Snowy Mountains
how long you will stay
how many students are in your party and what accommodation you will require
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to seek your permission for a visit to Snowy Mountain in New South Wales.
I am planning to organize a trek at snowy mountains for a period of one week. During the summer break students often feel home sick because of which they behaviour will become obnoxious. Hence, trekking will keep them entertained and boost their morale.
Fortunately, the weather fore caste shows a warm temperature during those dates. However, we will be prudent and carry necessary equipment’s for first aid in case of emergency. We will be staying there for 3 nights and 4 days.
At the moment there are 10 students who are willing to register immediately. Also, we will require an accommodation with all basic amenities like iron, fridge, heater and washing machine. In addition, I have a membership of Club Mahindra where we can avail good discount on the room rates.
I look forward to seeing your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Jessica Ayri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...ster immediately. Also, we will require an accommodation with all basic amenities like iron, fri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09259259259 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81963660005 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.746913580247 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4136610245 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.75 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126613696282 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440765731256 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544102888784 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792718140956 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077339246221 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.