Dear Natasha,
How’re you doing? I’m writing this reply letter for the question you’ve asked me a month ago, regarding music teacher for Ryan, your son.
As per your request, I contacted various music teachers here in Malta regarding classical and folk music which interests Ryan. Out of four teachers, I had shortlisted the teacher’s name and details for your reference. She has an incredible voice, extraordinary talent for playing guitar, violin, drums and working as a classical music teacher at St. Pious High School. Moreover, she has an experience of 9 years, and she conducts the yearly exam for her students to get promoted to the next level in learning.
Moreover, she has a private music school down the lane, at Dextrin where there are 18 students, of all ages. She is the best suitable teacher for Ryan because she cares about the kids under 10 years with the utmost love and affection, and teaches them accordingly.
I’ve attached her name, phone number and house address with this letter so that you can contact her personally and join Ryan at her school. If you’ve any queries regarding this you can ping me at any time.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
With Love,
Katherine
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oted to the next level in learning. Moreover, she has a private music school down th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09268292683 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61944406506 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668292682927 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1978685174 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218188617109 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820472941699 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569813874819 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125751661916 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673841084017 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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