Dear Mr James,
I am Alice and a member of the music society Rock Five at YMC hall. I am writing this letter on behalf of my band members and would like to express my disappointment regarding a letter we received from the secretary council informing us that the community hall will no longer be available to use.
I would like to bring to your attention about our music band and its popularity. We are one of the internationally recognized music band and perform various group performances and live concerts in and around the country. As a group of young musicians, we primilary focus on music and lyrics that promote peace and inequality among mankind. We often participate in charity events and volunteer for social causes which helps the community . After a hectic day at work, most people gather at the community hall to spend time with friends and family to enjoy good music.
Upon receiving positive feedback from the social community, we would like to continue our practise sessions in the YMC hall. If possible, could you please provide us with alternative days and time for practise or we can shift our practise hours to the weekends.
Looking forward for a positive reply
Thanking You
Yours Sincerely
Alice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... social causes which helps the community . After a hectic day at work, most people...
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... YMC hall. If possible, could you please provide us with alternative days and tim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94258373206 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66947556146 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8092095118 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170377442764 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603166809713 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408045932568 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886821938986 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463677411221 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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