You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practice in the community hall.
You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall.
Write a letter to the manager. In the letter:
• describe what the group does
• explain why the group is good for the community
• suggest alternative days and times for practice
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request access to the community hall for band practice. We rehearse every Tuesday and Friday evening and were recently informed that we will not be able to continue using the hall.
We are a post-grunge rock band named 'Crickets' and we have been trying to create awareness and market ourselves in the community.
Furthermore, we perform for local churches and small local organizations free of cost as an attempt to give back to the community. We use this as an opportunity to better ourselves artistically and eventually be able to represent our town in the global landscape.
Additionally, we believe our group has a positive impact on our community since we perform to raise funds for local charitable organizations.
We require consistent practice and rehearsal to be able to perform. Please let us know if you could accommodate us at any other time during the weekday.
Hoping you consider our request.
Yours sincerely,
Praneet K Nadar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11585365854 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92201713147 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1536716031 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161945684433 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609076121766 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496923506475 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831259099301 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635399409841 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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