You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall.
You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall.
Write a letter to the manager. In the letter:
• describe what the group does
• explain why the group is good for the community
• suggest alternative days and times for practice
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am one of the members of the group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. All of us have a passion for music. Community hall is a place where every member of the group shares his/her knowledge about the music, encouraging the new members to learn. In fact, this group is a stressbuster for all the members.
The group is beneficial for the community. During the time of festivals and events, the group performs along with the group of dancers to entertain the community and enjoy to the fullest. As no fees is charged to join the group, people feel free to come and release their worries of hectic and stressful working schedule.
If there is some issue with the days and timings for the practice, check if the community hall is available on Monday so that people can get rid of Monday blues. Rather than keeping the timings 7-8 p.m, the timings can be 8-9 p.m. as there are all adults in the group and it would not be a problem for them even if it is a bit late.
I look forward to your swift attention and action to this matter.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is a stressbuster for all the members. The group is beneficial for the communit...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion to this matter. Yours faithfully, John
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this matter. Yours faithfully, John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52173913043 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38323432121 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584541062802 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2617115511 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278032970091 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101202995616 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865388798582 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139758838872 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106324167232 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.