You are planning to go on a holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter.
• Why you need a holiday.
• Your holiday plans.
• Why you need your friend to join with you.
Dear Clara,
How are you, Its been almost a year since we met. I am writing you this letter to invite you for a holiday trip with me to Europe.
As you know, my job has been very stressful lately, I have worked even on the weekends and public holidays because of a deadline we had for the launch of a new project. Since the project is completed, as an incentive the company has provided me two tickets to europe. It is a 15 day package and includes accommodation and sight-seeing throughout the Europe.
I would be delighted if you can join me, since the ticket is take care of already, it will be light on you purse. Also, I know you have always wanted to visit the Buckingham Palace. Do you remember how we use to plan all the activities, let us make it happen.
I hope you can accompany me on this trip as it has been so long we havent had a decent outing together. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards
Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ckingham Palace. Do you remember how we use to plan all the activities, let us make...
^^^
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... on this trip as it has been so long we havent had a decent outing together. Looking f...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44727346966 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649717514124 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9976075802 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7272727273 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243290649545 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913380545663 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800881848654 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160827725708 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748971589208 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.